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ERQ marking: Biology in relationships

Below you will find three sample ERQs for the question: To what extent do biological factors play a role in personal relationships?

When marking each sample, refer to the rubric to award marks. After each sample, there is a predicted grade as well as feedback on the strengths and limitations of the response.

ERQ rubric

ERQ Sample 1

When looking at the biological factors that influence the origins of attractions there are two factors that can be looked at: roles of evolutionary arguments and roles of hormones. One hormone that influences the origins of attraction is oxytocin. In the brain, it acts primarily as a neurotransmitter and is released during labour and initiation of maternal behaviour. It is often referred to as the “cuddle hormone” because it is related to bonding in couples. Baumgartner et. al (2008) did a study looking at the effect of oxytocin following breaches of trust. The used an fMRI to look at the brain during a “trust game”. The rules of the game were that the investor must decide if they will keep or share a sum of money that is given to them. If they decide to share the money, the sum of it will triple. Therefore, the trustee has to choose between repaying the trust to the investor and sharing the money or keeping the whole sum. The game was focused on the dilemma of trusting or not trusting. Participants had to weigh out the risks factors as well as the profits. Participants were placed under an fMRI scanner and received one of two conditions. They were either given an oxytocin nasal spray or a placebo one. In the first round they were asked to play the “trust game” with another human, and in the second condition they were asked to play the same game but this time with a computer. They were informed that their investment was poor due to the fact that the trust was broken. Then they were asked to make the next investment decision. Participants who received the placebo before they started playing were more likely to decrease their rate of trust after they were told that the trust had been broken. On the contrary, those who were given the oxytocin nasal spray continued to invest at similar rates, despite the fact that the other person had broken the trust. They showed decreases in responses in the amygdala, which is involved in emotion and fear learning. It also has many oxytocin receptors. The results seemed to show that the oxytocin spray played a role in decreasing fear reactions, which could arise from betrayal. Despite having the trust broken, participants continued to invest money.

The study lacks ecological validity because it is very artificial. However, it can be replicated, which increases its reliability. The study was also standardized. It is also considered slightly reductionist, as it does not take into account socio-cultural and cognitive factors. An fMRI was used which shows gives us the direct impact of an increase of oxytocin.

An evolutionary behaviour focuses primarily on the idea of natural selection. This means that when looking for something to have offspring with, with choose somebody with the best gene pool to be passed down generations. One example of this is the gene MHC, or the Major Histocompatibility Complex, a group of genes, which play a role in the immune system. The more diverse the MHC gene’s are, the stronger the immune system of the offspring.

A study done by Wedekind (1995) looked at the MHC gene, and if it would affect mate choice. The study was made up of 49 females and 44 male students. All of them were “typed” for their MHC and it was noted if women were taking oral contraceptives. The male participants were asked to wear a t-shirt for two nights and keep it in an open bag for the day. They were asked not to use anything with a scent, such as perfume or scented soap. They were also asked not to engage in sexual intercourse for the duration of the experiment and not eat anything spicy. Women were later asked to rank the smell of 7 t-shirts, with each t-shirt lying in a cardboard box with a smelling hole. Three t-shirts had a similar MHC to that of the woman, three had dissimilar, and one of the t-shirts was a control with no scent. Women were tested when possible in their second week after menstruation and were asked to prepare by using a nasal spray for 2 weeks before. Women scored the odours for sexiness and intensity. Researchers found that women scored odours more pleasant when they came from a man with dissimilar MHC to them. This was reversed when women were taking oral contraceptives. The results suggest that MHC or linked genes influence human mate choice.

The study clearly supports the evolutionary argument for mate selection in humans. The study has a number of strengths. Firstly, it has been replicated by Jacob et. al, and the same results were found, establishing its reliability. The researcher was also able to minimize demand characteristic by using a double-blind experiment. Neither the researcher nor the participant knew what t-shirt they were being exposed to at any point in the study. The study also brought in research showing that couples that suffer more spontaneous abortions often have a closer shared MHC gene than those who do not have spontaneous abortions. Despite all of the supporting evidence, it can be argued that the study is too reductionist as it over-simplifies human mate selection down to the MHC gene, not accounting for anything else.

On the contrary, it is also important to consider socio-cultural factors in the origins of attraction. Zajonc proposed the “Mere Exposure Effect”, which predicts that the familiarity that we develop with somebody often leads to liking. He tested this in a study with students. They were shown a series of photographs of men, some of which were in there more than once. He then asked them to rank the males on levels of attractiveness. He found a correlation between frequency of photo and level of attractiveness.

The theory is able to explain changes in levels of attractiveness on a social level. Much of it has to do with the fact that we relate to them based on social and cultural norms, which would make them our ingroup. However, the theory does not explain why some relationships do not last and why some last longer than others, no matter how much time people spent with each other beforehand.

Research on biological factors in attraction has given a lot of insight on the origin of relationships. However, there are a number of limitations to studying biology in relationships. Firstly, most biological research is correlational in nature and does not establish a cause and effect relationship. Often the experiments that are conducted are highly artificial because they are studied in a laboratory. The results are unlikely to be transferred into the real world. In addition, often cultural differences are stressed in research when in fact, with the changes in society, many cultures may have more similarities than differences. Finally, it is difficult to determine if attraction is the beginning of a relationship or something that follows other factors.

1050 words

Focus: The response is clearly focused on the command term and the demands of the question. 2 marks.

Knowledge and understanding: There is good knowledge and understanding relevant to the question - natural selection, the role of oxytocin, etc.  Good use of terminology. 6 marks.

Use of research: Research is used effectively and is appropriate for the demands of the question. 6 marks.

Critical thinking: Sound evidence of critical thinking.  Ideas are unpacked and explicitly linked to the studies. 6 marks.

Clarity and organization: Clear and well organized. 2 marks.

Total marks: 22 marks

IB Predicted: 7

ERQ Sample 2

Biological factors seem to play a role in the origin of attraction, but cognitive factors are also important in this process. A study that demonstrates the biological factors is Wedekind's smelly T-shirt study, and a study that demonstrates the cognitive factors is Veitch and Griffitt's good news study.

One of the things that can influence our choice of partner is their MHC - Major Histocompatibility Complex, a group of genes that seem to play an important role in the immune system, and is expressed through body odour. Since the genes for immunity are expressed co-dominantly, it is in the partner's interest to have different versions of the gene to give better immunity to their offsprings. Wedekind decided to carry out a study and assess if the MHC had an effect on the mating choice of university females. He had 49 females and 44 males take part in this experiment, and at first, assessed each participant for their MHC type and noted if the females were taking oral contraceptives. He then asked the males to sleep in the same shirt for two days and refrain from using scented soap or deodorant, as to preserve their natural body odour on the shirt. He then asked the female students to come to the lab and smell and score 7 different boxes with shirts inside them - three were from males of a different MHC than the female, three were from males of the same MHC as the female, and one was a clean shirt that was used as the control. The females were scoring the intensity and pleasantness of each odour. His results showed that the females preferred the odour of the shirt from a male with a different MHC than they themselves had, but oral contraceptives caused this result to be reversed, implying that the contraceptives change a female's sense of smell and therefore influence her partner choice for the worse.

The strengths of this experiment are the fact it was a double-blind study, so demand characteristics were limited, and that it has since been reproduced many times on humans as well as on rats. The weaknesses include a non-representative sample, for all of the participants were students from the same area and of the same age and the fact that it is reductionist, for it reduces attraction to body odour and ignores other aspects of it like physical looks or personality of the possible mate.

A different argument comes from the cognitive approach and suggests that a person's outlook on life has a strong effect on their attractivity. In an experiment carried out by Veitch & Griffitt, the participants were asked to read either a positive or negative news broadcast. The subjects then rated the attractiveness of the broadcasters, and regularly rated the participants who read the positive news as more attractive than the participants who read the bad news.

Biological research can give us insight into how we react to physical stimuli, and it is fairly easy to control for variables when studying physical reactions and qualities of a human being. However, they often have low ecological validity and tend to be quite reductionist in their conclusions, leaving out other factors that are also most likely significant.

Biological factors like the MHC type of the potential partner seem to influence our likelihood of being attracted to them as demonstrated by Wedekind but aren't the sole defining factors in attraction. One's personality also plays a role, as demonstrated by Veitch & Griffitt, and other aspects like physical appearance and current circumstances are all a part of the attraction process.

600 words

Focus: The response is generally focused, but the question of extent could be more developed. 1 mark.

Knowledge and understanding: There is some good knowledge and understanding; terminology could be used more effectively to discuss research. 4 marks.

Use of research: The first study is used effectively; the second study is not well linked to the first and is not well explained. 3 marks.

Critical thinking: There is some evidence of critical thinking, but this needed to be more developed. 3 marks.

Clarity and organization: The response is generally clear but the conclusions could be better developed. Final paragraphs lack clarity and development. 1 mark.

Total marks: 11 marks

IB Predicted: 5

ERQ Sample 3

Attraction is the physical appearance and physical behaviour of an individual, based on another individual’s opinion. The more characteristics one found positive, the more attractive they were presumed/ranked. Attraction doesn’t only have to be the physical characteristics of an individual, but also the genetic components. Logically, one cannot tell another's genes just by looking at them, however, some psychological studies looked at how genetics and neurotransmitters affected the level of one’s attractiveness. Of course, attraction also has to do with the character of an individual, however, this isn’t the main focus of this essay.

A study conducted by Wedekind (1995), investigated whether or not females would choose a partner, who would benefit their future potential children. This is specifically related to the similarity of the MHC gene, regarding the strength of one’s immune system. The sample consisted of a total of 93 university students (49 female and 44 male), who were excluded if pregnant and/or had any medical history of diseases or traumatic experiences. Before the task started, women were noted if they took any oral contraceptives, since it could influence their decision on a “perfect” partner. The males were asked to wear a T-shirt for 2 nights and to keep it inside a plastic bag during the day. Women were asked to smell each of the shirts (total of 7), 3 of them were men with similar MHC genetics to the woman, and 3 of them were men with different MHC genetics to the woman, and 1 be the control, meaning no one was wearing it, through a double-blind experiment methodology. This meant, that neither the researchers nor the participants knew which shirt the women were exposed to during the task. The women rated each of the shirts from a scale of 1-10, 5 being neutral. The results reveal that women preferred men with a genetic makeup different from their own, in order for their potential children to have a healthier immune system. The participants were both informed and debriefed, having this study have low numbers of ethical problems, meaning the results are relatively reliable. This includes no confounding variables being confirmed, due to the fact that the participants knew exactly what the task was, as well as what the final results were.

Fisher et al (2003), on the other hand, looked at the role of attraction between males and females, using fMRI technology to investigate the neurobiological mechanisms associated with attraction. The sample consisted of 10 females and 7 males between the ages of 18-26, who have each reported for being “in romantic love” for an average time period of 7.5 months. The participants filled out a questionnaire called the “Passionate Love Scale”, in order for the researchers to investigate how the participants felt regarding their relationships. The participants completed three different tasks and were placed under an fMRI scanner, in order to see which concrete part of the brain is most activated, in order to then determine the “most attractive”. The tasks were, first, to see a photograph of their loved one, second, to perform a distraction task of counting backwards, or third, a photograph of a neural acquaintance, being a stranger.

This entire process was repeated 6 times, in order to see whether or not there were any constant active areas of the brain under the live activity of an fMRI scan. The results indicated, that the dopamine-rich brain areas were most activated in the brain when participants looked at a picture of their “loved one”. These dopamine-rich areas are also associated with motivation, reward, and goal orientation. The brain circuits in the dopamine-rich areas were dedicated to attraction having being considered to addiction, implying that “romantic love” is equal to addiction. Fisher argues, that this “romantic love” concept is universal and is based on neurobiological factors, which according to the results, is confirmed, also meaning the results could potentially be generalized to a wider population.

However, as was mentioned at the beginning of attraction studies, attraction isn’t only based on the genetic components or neurobiological factors, generally biological factors, however, it can also be based on the physical factors, also known as the mere exposure effect in Festinger et al’s (1950) study. Festinger investigated the buildup of friendship patterns between student couples, regarding social communication. The procedure consisted of constant interviews and observations done by the researchers along with the participants, in order to see how certain “normal effects” would impact the attractiveness of another individual forming a friendship or a relationship. The results indicated, as mentioned above, a mere exposure effect. This meant, that the more two individuals see one another around the school hallways or within classes, the more attractive do they appear. Simply saying, the more one is in someone else’s physical presence, the more attractive they are ranked. In this specific study, the higher the chances for the buildup of friendships. For instance, people who live in the same building or are next-door neighbours, have a higher chance of being closer friends than those that live further away. This is assumed, that they are attracted to one another based on biological factors.

Festinger argued that physical proximity increased the opportunity for social communication, increasing relationships and friendships. This includes the factor of psychological proximity, having possibilities to continue relationships and/or friendships through the Internet, such as dating sites, or chatting networks. Festinger determined that physical, psychological, and geographical factors play important roles in how attractive one individual expressed to be, as well as the concept of the mere exposure effect.

Overall, in conclusion, attraction is based on how someone’s experience and perception about physical/biological characteristics of the individual one is attracted to. This is of course based on an individual’s “own scale” of whether certain characteristics are considered attractive. Generally, all biological, cognitive, and sociocultural approaches play a role in choosing the right partner for a specific individual, however, to some extent, it’s the biological factors that play the most important roles, based on Wedekind and Fisher et al. The more different one is compared to someone else, the more attractive they seem, due to possibly having more positive impacts such as differential characteristics and health on the future children.

1034 words

Focus: The introduction does not clearly set up the focus of the essay.  The focus is generally maintained, with some lapses. 1 mark.

Knowledge and understanding: There is relevant knowledge and understanding.  Terminology is generally used effectively. 5 marks.

Use of research: The research should be more explicitly linked to the question of “attraction.”  Studies are appropriate and well described. 4 marks.

Critical thinking: Critical thinking is limited and not well developed.  Ethics, for example, is of limited relevance to the question. 2 mark.

Clarity and organization: Introduction lacks clarity. Language use is not always clear. 1 mark.

Total marks: 13 marks

IB Predicted: 6