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ERQ marking: Evolution

Below you will find three sample ERQs for the question: Evaluate one evolutionary argument to explain one human behaviour.

For each of the samples, refer to the rubric to award marks. After each sample, there is a predicted grade as well as feedback on the strengths and limitations of the sample.

ERQ rubric

 

Sample 1

The evolutionary argument of natural selection can be applied to study the psychology of people’s mating behaviour. Natural selection argues that those living things which are more suited to their environments are the most likely to survive and have healthy offspring. And what the evolutionary psychologists are trying to find out is to what extent people’s behaviour is influenced by this theory of natural selection. Evolutionary psychologists believe that behaviour can be passed down from parent to offspring - that there is a genetic root to human behaviour. They argue that those behaviours that increase the chance that offspring will survive are the behaviours that survive in the gene pool.

The way we choose a mate may influence if our offspring survive. Wedekind (1995) and Bailey & Pillard (1993) were psychologists who wanted to see whether there was any correlation between natural selection and people’s mating behaviours.

Wedekind conducted an experiment. His aim was to see whether women would prefer the body odours of men whose MHC genes were more or less similar to their own. Major Histocompatibility Complex holds genetic information about one’s immune system. Wedekind’s hypothesis was that women would prefer men with MHC most different to their own since a child has the strongest immune system when it gets different MHCs from both its parents.  According to Wedekind, natural selection would influence women’s preferences of men just by the smells of their t-shirts. To test this, he divided the participants into two groups - male and female. All males were given the same clear t-shirts and asked to put them on for two nights and to remain as odour neutral as possible (no perfumes, no sex, etc) so they would retain their natural scents. After these two days, all their shirts were put into different boxes with holes to allow the odours to come out. The women participants were asked to come in and smell the seven t-shirts. Three of those were worn by men who had MHC similar to their own, three of them - different, and one was a control sample. Overall, women found the shirts of men with dissimilar MHC more attractive than the others.

A strength of this study is that it is unlikely that demand characteristics significantly influenced the results as it was a double-blind experiment (neither the researcher nor the participant knew which t-shirt was in the box). A limitation is construct validity. The conclusion of the experiment was that women found men with different MHC makeup more pleasant. However, the question is, does the fact that the women found certain men’s t-shirts’ smells more attractive mean that those women would want to have sexual relations with the men who wore them? This assumption would seem overly reductionist as it neglects all the social and cognitive elements that play role in human attraction. It also lacks ecological validity as, during a real-life dating situation, women do more than smell men's t-shirts. However, this study does provide some empirical support for an evolutionary argument.

Bailey and Pillard wanted to determine if evolution played a role in homosexual relationships as well. To do this, they carried out a twin study, comparing monozygotic and dizygous males twins to find the concordance rate for homosexuality.  To do this, they had a volunteer sample that was collected through gay publications.  They then had the twins fill in surveys.  They found that the concordance rate of 52% for MZ twins and only 22% for DZ twins.  This indicates that the behaviour is genetic so it must have an evolutionary advantage. The study, however, was unethical as often the second twin was not available so information about his sexuality was taken from his brother.  In addition, the sample was biased as only men were used.

Overall, the evolutionary argument of people’s mating behaviour has more limitations than strength. Its strength is that there has been a lot of research and there seems to be a trend in the results. However, it is difficult to establish a cause and effect relationship. There are limitations regarding reductionism, construct validity and poor methodology. It is difficult to clearly define and quantitatively measure any concepts in evolutionary theory as, for example, attraction, is a subjective construct. Another issue is that most of the studies on mating behaviour will lack ecological validity because a researcher cannot make love happen by controlling independent variables. The only solution is to ask people about their preferences and behaviour, but this is a poor methodology and produces unverifiable results. Overall, natural selection may be influencing people’s mating behaviour significantly; however, the inability to isolate the biological from the social and cognitive factors in humans makes it impossible to be certain about causation.


786 words

Focus on the question: The beginning of the essay introduces the question and defines natural selection.  It is focused on the question and explains how the essay will be developed.  However, the essay does not remain focused on the question, including an irrelevant section on genetic inheritance.  1 mark.

Knowledge and understanding: Concepts are well explained, although the evolutionary argument could be more developed. Psychological terminology is, for the most part, used correctly. The explanation of ecological validity is not really clear. The use of a study of genetics rather than evolution demonstrates a lack of understanding of evolutionary vs genetics arguments.  4 marks

Use of research: There is only one study that is used effectively.  The second study is only of marginal relevance to the question and does not directly address evolutionary arguments for mating behaviour.  2 marks.

Critical thinking: The response demonstrates good critical thinking, but it is not always well developed. Some ideas could be better explained. Strengths of the theory are limited. Limited to the evaluation of one study.  3 marks.

Clarity and organization: The answer demonstrates clarity and organization throughout the response.  2 marks

Total: 12 marks

Predicted: 5

Sample 2

An evolutionary argument of human attraction is sexual selection. It states that the average person looks for a healthy partner with specific characteristics in order to make sure to be able to produce strong and healthy offspring, thus passing on the genes that are more suited to the environment from the healthy parents. This theory can be seen in almost all humans, studies such as Shackelford and Larsen (1997) and Buss (1989) both show how sexual selection influences in human mating behaviour.

The aim of a study done by Shackelford and Larsen (1997) was to assess through observation whether facial attractiveness would inform about one's health. The sample in this study consisted of about 60 women and 30 men. The study procedure was split into three parts. The first consisted of participants taking part in daily physical symptom report. They were asked to fill out a form checking if they experienced one or more of seven symptoms such as nausea, runny nose or headaches. They were asked to do this two times a day for four weeks. The second part of the study was to assess cardiovascular health. The final part of the study was the observer ratings. Photographs were taken of each participant. The photographs were first shown to an independent group made up of an equal number of men and women. They were asked to assess the photographs on a nine-point scale with 0 being the midpoint, negative being unattractive and positive being attractive.

The study resulted in there being a relationship between facial attractiveness and health. Attractive participants showed both better cardiovascular health as well as fewer symptoms over the four-week study. Through these results, one can claim that we are more attracted to attractive people due to the correlation between looks and greater health, thus tying it back to the evolutionary argument that natural selection will always be very prominent in our choice of partners.

The second study that demonstrates natural selection is a study conducted by Buss (1989). The aim was to find out what people were looking for in a partner and if these values made sense from an evolutionary perspective. This study consisted of 37 samples from 33 countries. A questionnaire was used to find out how each sex valued earnings, ambition, youth, physical attractiveness and chastity.

From the data collected, females were found to put more importance on physical cues related to health, whereas the men valued traits related to fertility. These results showed the different priorities the two sexes have and provide evidence toward the evolutionary argument of natural selection across multiple cultures.

Evolutionary arguments are based on the assumption that behaviours are passed on genetically. It is difficult to confirm the reliability of such studies as the researcher might experience confirmation bias. The evolutionary argument of natural selection is difficult to study as most of the research is done in an environment that has low ecological validity.  Both Shackelford and Larsen (1997) and Buss (1989) show how natural selection might be passed down through genetics but as evolutionary arguments are difficult to fully determine, there will always be uncertainties.



520 words

Focus on the question: The introduction identifies the question and the essay is focused on evolutionary arguments for interpersonal relationships. However, the command term - evaluate - is not addressed.  1 mark.

Knowledge and understanding: The response uses the terms natural selection and sexual selection interchangeably, without a clear understanding of the difference. There is some understanding of evolutionary theory, but it needed more development. Psychological terminology is used but not always effectively.  3 marks.

Use of research: There are two studies that are outlined. The first study is a bit unclear with regard to the sample used. It appears that the actual participants were the second group of students and not the first.  The study could be more clearly explained.  The second study is very unclear and the results are actually incorrect. 3 marks

Critical thinking: There is limited evidence of critical thinking. All critical thinking is in the final paragraph and is not clearly developed or accurate.  2 marks

Clarity and organization: The response does not address the command term. Language does not always communicate effectively. 1 mark.

Total: 10 marks

Predicted: 4

Sample 3

An evolutionary argument that can explain human mating behaviour, is sexual selection. Evolution is the change over time in living organisms of heritable characteristics of a species. The theory of evolution states that by natural selection, organisms that adapt better to environmental changes are more likely to survive, reproduce, and thus pass on their genes. Sexual selection, a particular aspect of natural selection, states that in order to produce and protect the most healthy offspring, the perfect mating partner is found. Because the evolutionary argument states this, the way humans find mating partners must be beneficial to human survival and reproduction, and thus an adaptive behaviour. Three studies that looked at the human mating behaviour were Ronay and von Hipper, Wedekind, and Buss.

The aim of the study by Ronay and von Hippel (2010) was to determine if males would take greater risks in the presence of an attractive female. To do this, the levels of testosterone were also tested. The researchers had a sample of young Australian male skateboarders that were recruited at skateboard parks. The study took place in the afternoon. They were assigned to one of two conditions, the male-researcher condition and the female-researcher condition. They were asked to do two different tricks, ten times each. One trick that was easy, and the other difficult. Each attempt at the trick was marked as a success, an aborted attempt or a crash landing. To measure testosterone, saliva samples were collected. The researchers found that when the participants did their tricks in front of the female researcher, they took greater risks on the difficult tricks. They aborted tricks less and their testosterone levels were higher. From this study, it can be seen that testosterone may cause men to take greater physical risks when in the presence of a woman. This study may support evolutionary theory as risk-taking is used as a sign for potential mates to show that the male is healthy and strong.  In other words, he is able to produce and protect his offspring. A limitation of the study would be the ethical issue of deception, as the participants did not know they were being tested for their human mating behaviour. It is possible that if they had known this was the case, they would be embarrassed.

Another study that looks at the evolutionary argument for the human mating behaviour is by Wedekind (1995). The aim of this study was to see if women are attracted to men based on his MHC (major histocompatibility complex). The MHC is a group of proteins that let the immune system recognize different pathogens. It is argued that when the MHC genes of parents are diverse, the offspring will have a stronger immune system and that the way we smell is a sign of our MHC. The researchers took a sample of female and male students, and each of their MHC was found. The men were asked to wear a T-shirt for two nights, have their everyday clothes and bed sheets washed in perfume free detergents and shower with perfume-free soap.  After the two days, the women in the study were asked to rank the smell of 7 t-shirts, three of which contained t-shirts from men with similar MHC as the woman, three that were different, and one that was unworn. They ranked the smell for intensity, and ‘sexiness’ (on a scale of 0-10). The researchers found that the women scored the t-shirt of a male with a different MHC than their own higher than when the MHC was similar. The study shows that MHC may influence human mate choice, which can support the argument of sexual selection as we are looking to produce the most healthy offspring. A strength of this study is that the variable of MHC was isolated completely. There were extensive measures taken to ensure that the only the only variable tested was the smell of the MHC on the t-shirt. This means that the study has high internal validity. A limitation would be that while the variable was isolated, it is not a good representation of how a mate is found - women do not go around smelling shirts in boxes

The aim of  Buss (1989) was to support the idea that men look for fertile women, and women look for men that can support their offspring. To do this, the researchers had a sample of 10,000 participants from 37 different cultures and gave them a questionnaire. They found that men thought youth was highly important in a mate, and for women, maturity and higher social status was important. This can show that men want to maximize the potential for fertilization, which can come from younger women. And women want to ensure the likelihood of reproduction and having a healthy offspring through financial help and resources that can come from a higher social status. The results of this study explain the human mating behaviour as looking for the most optimal mating partner to reproduce a healthy offspring, which can be argued to be sexual selection. A strength of this study is the huge sample size of 10,000, this can ensure more reliability in the findings. In addition, the study was cross-cultural. A limitation would be that it was in the form of a questionnaire, meaning that the participants could have displayed demand characteristics in order to look better in front of the researchers.

The argument of sexual selection for the human mating behaviour can be supported through the studies by Ronay and von Hipper, Wedekind, and Buss. This evolutionary argument, however, does have its limitations. The evolutionary theory of sexual selection is based on the assumption that behaviours are genetically inherited. In actuality, it is not yet know to what extent human behaviours are actually inherited. In addition, it is hard to test human mating behaviour as there may be cultural influences or different ways humans have learned to find mates. The sexual selection theory assumes that a sexual partner is found for the sole reason of reproducing. Research in this theory also lacks ecological validity. As mentioned before with the study by Wedekind, it is highly unlikely a woman will find a mate through the act of smelling shirts and rating their smell. Also, the study by Buss can be seen as lacking ecological validity as the participants were given questionnaires which may be more what the person "thinks" they would do, rather than their actual behaviour. Experiments in this theory also may cause researchers to be susceptible to confirmation bias, as they see what they expect to see. An example of this would be in the study by Buss as it’s original aim was to support an already developed claim. A strength of this theory, however, would be its generalizability. Through these studies, it is clear that the sexual selection evolution argument can explain human mating behaviour, as humans look for mates that will allow for reproduction and healthy offsprings


1156 words

Focus on the question: The response is focused on the demands of the question. 2 marks.

Knowledge and understanding: The response demonstrates clear understanding of sexual selection.  Terminology is used appropriately. 6 marks.

Use of research: There are three studies used to support the essay.  Each study is clearly explained and explicitly linked to the question of sexual selection. 6 marks.

Critical thinking: There is some good evidence of critical thinking.  The theory of sexual selection is clearly evaluated.  The evaluation of the skateboard study could be more developed. 5 marks.

Clarity and organization: The answer demonstrates clarity and organization throughout the response. 2 marks.

Total: 21 marks

Predicted: 7