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ERQ marking: Hormones

Below you will find three sample ERQs for the question: Evaluate research on the role of hormones of one or more hormones in human behaviour.

For each of the samples, refer to the rubric to award marks. After each sample, there is a predicted grade as well as feedback on the strengths and limitations of the sample.

ERQ rubric

 

Sample 1

McGaugh and Cahill (1995) and Newcomer et al (1999) examined the roles of adrenaline and cortisol on human memory. Hormones are chemicals that affect human behaviour. They are secreted by glands in the endocrine system and are released into the bloodstream, meaning they take longer to produce changes in human behaviour than neurotransmitters. Hormones can only produce reactions in certain target cells, that have appropriate receptor sites for these specific hormones. The hormone adrenaline secreted by the adrenal gland and is responsible for arousal and the “fight or flight” response, it increases the heart rate, blood pressure and respiration. Cortisol is also secreted by the adrenal gland and is responsible for controlling blood sugar levels, metabolic regulation and its levels rise during periods of stress.

Psychologists believe that the stress hormone adrenaline plays a role in the creation of emotional memories. Adrenaline is responsible for stimulating the sympathetic nervous system. Cahill and McGaugh conducted a lab experiment in which there were two groups of participants. The first group was shown 12 slides accompanied by a rather boring story about a boy that was visiting his father in a hospital. The second group was shown the same 12 slides but told a traumatic story about a boy that was in a car accident in which his legs were severed.  After the story, the participants were asked to rate their level of emotion. Two weeks later, the participants were asked to come back to answer a set of questions regarding the stories they were told. They had three options for each question to choose as an answer. The researchers did a follow-up study in which they repeated the procedure but injected the group exposed to the “traumatic” story with a beta-blocker, propranolol. Propranolol interferes with the release of adrenaline and prevents the activation of the amygdala to prevent the formation of emotional memories.

In this first study, the group exposed to the “traumatic” story had better accuracy in terms of remembering details. They were also more capable of remembering details from the slides compared to the group exposed to the uninteresting story. In the follow-up study, the group that was injected with beta-blockers and exposed to the “traumatic” story performed no better than the group exposed to the non-emotional story. This suggests that the prevention of the release of adrenaline caused the inability to recall the “emotional” story.

By carrying out a highly controlled lab experiment Cahill and McGaugh were able to establish a cause and effect relationship between adrenaline’s interaction within the amygdala and the formation of emotional memories. As well this experiment was highly standardised, therefore it is easy to replicate. As it is easy to replicate, similar results would increase the reliability of the results.

One limitation of this experiment was its artificiality. The experiment was highly-controlled and took place in a lab setting, questioning its ecological validity. Instead of experiencing the event themselves they were told a story accompanied by 12 images in a lab environment. In addition, the participants self-reported their emotional state, there was no objective measure.

In an experiment conducted by Newcomer et al, the effect of levels of cortisol on verbal declarative memory was tested.  The participants were matched to one of three conditions based on age and gender. In the first condition, the participants were given a 160 mg tablet of cortisol daily during the four-day experiment. These tablets produced a level of cortisol that one would experience during a major stress event. The second condition had the participants take a 40 mg tablet of cortisol per day. This level of cortisol replicates the levels of cortisol experienced by someone during a low-stress event.  The last condition had participants take placebo tablets. The function of this was to provide a control group that eliminated the effect of taking a pill in itself. Each participant had to listen to a prose paragraph and then recall it in over a period of four days. This was done in order to test their verbal declarative memory.

The participants in the high-cortisol condition performed the worst in the verbal declarative memory task. This suggests significant negative effects on verbal declarative memory. On the other hand, the low levels cortisol condition showed better recall than the placebo group. These findings suggest that low levels of cortisol actually may enhance verbal declarative memory.

As the researchers manipulate the independent variable, a cause and effect relationship was established. Particularly the effect of cortisol levels on one’s verbal declarative memory. This experiment was highly standardised, therefore easily replicable. Replicability suggests high reliability of the experiment’s findings. This was a double-blind laboratory experiment. This meant that neither the experimenter nor the participant knew which group was receiving the cortisol pills or placebo pills. This eliminated demand characteristics such as the expectancy effect in which the participant acts the way they think they should act in order to produce data that aligns with the hypothesis. The participants weren’t aware of the dose of cortisol they were given, therefore couldn’t try to produce any desirable results.

Given that the experiment was conducted over a period of four days, extraneous variables from the participants’ daily lives were not controlled, suggesting low internal validity. Depending on the events of the participants’ day, the levels of cortisol could have fluctuated and influenced the findings.

Both Cahill & McGaugh’s, as well as Newcomer et al’s research, suggest that a strong relationship is present between the release of hormones and the consolidation and recall of memory.

917 words

Focus on the question: The essay is well developed and clearly focused on the demands of the question.  2 marks.

Knowledge and understanding: There is good knowledge of both the role of the hormones and research methodology.  The role of cortisol could be better explained. The role of beta-blockers is not correctly stated. Psychological terminology is correctly applied. 4 marks

Use of research: Two studies, both well described and linked to the question of the role of hormones on behaviour. 6 marks.

Critical thinking: Critical thinking is appropriate and well linked to the demands of the question. 6 mark.

Clarity and organization: The essay is well organized. The command term is met and the language of the essay is clear. 2 mark

Total: 20 marks

Predicted: 7

Sample 2

Hormones are a class of chemicals that can affect behaviour. Hormones are secreted by glands and then released into the bloodstream for distribution and although they work at a slower rate than neurotransmitters their effect on the human body lasts longer. Each hormone has the ability to produce a response only in its respective target cells. As hormones reach their target cells they bind with receptor sites and trigger a response. Two hormones that appear to play an important role in human relationships are testosterone and oxytocin.

One study that looked at the effect of one hormone was the "Skateboard study."  In this study, researchers measured the level of testosterone in male skateboarders both before and after carrying out "tricks" in front of a male or a female researcher.  They found that the skateboarders were willing to take more risks when in front of a female research.  In addition, their testosterone was higher.  This shows that there is a link between testosterone levels and risk-taking behaviour. This may have an evolutionary advantage as men with higher levels of testosterone have a greater chance of reproduction.

A  strength of this study is that it could easily be replicated.  A limitation is that it was only done with Australian skateboarders. This makes it difficult to generalize to a larger population and lacks external validity.

A second study of the role of hormones in interpersonal relationships was carried out by Ditzen et al. He wanted to see if oxytocin levels had an influence on human trust and communication patterns.  To carry out the experiment, the researchers had a couple discuss a problematic issue.  One group received oxytocin intranasally; the other group was given a placebo. The study was a double-blind control design.  When watching the video of the conversation, the researcher did not know if the couple had taken a placebo or the oxytocin. In addition, levels of the stress hormone "cortisol" were measured before and after. The results showed that oxytocin condition had lower levels of stress, both in their conversation and in the level of cortisol.

A strength of this research is that it establishes a clear relationship between the independent and dependent variables, and explains how hormones can positively impact human behaviour.  A limitation is that it has low ecological validity as the discussion took place under lab conditions and the level of oxytocin was artificially manipulated. The study took two measures in order to increase the validity of the findings.

Research on hormones can help us better understand the chemicals that cause certain reactions in our bodies and behaviour. However, limiting behavioural explanations simply to hormones is reductionist.  For example, in the Ditzen study, culture and gender norms may affect the couple's interaction. 

458 words

Focus on the question: The introduction could be better focused on the question.  The question asks the student to evaluate research on hormones.  The introduction should be more focused on the question.  Otherwise, the essay is focused on the question.  2 marks.

Knowledge and understanding: The response demonstrates some understanding relevant to the question. The actual role of the hormones is not identified and the effects of the hormones in the studies are not explained. Terminology is not used effectively.  It is often dropped into the essay with no clear demonstration of understanding  2 marks.

Use of research: Both studies are valid.  Ronay and von Hippel's skateboarder study is not well explained with regard to the role of testosterone.  The study by Ditzen is satisfactorily described but should be better explained. 4 marks

Critical thinking: There is some evidence of critical thinking, but it is limited and often superficial. Ideas are not developed.  2 marks

Clarity and organization: The response is well-organized and language communicates effectively. 2 marks.

Total: 12 marks

Predicted: 5

Sample 3

Hormones are a class of chemicals which are secreted by glands within our endocrine system. Hormones seem to be responsible for some human behaviour. Two hormones are cortisol and adrenaline - both related to the ‘fight or flight’ response - also play a role in memory.  Two studies that examine the role of these hormones on memory were carried out by McGaugh & Cahill and Newcomer. Hormones can be studied either by changing the level of hormones in the blood or by blocking hormone receptor sites (target cells) in the brain.

McGaugh and Cahill (1995) carried out a lab experiment in order to study the effect of the hormone adrenaline on flashbulb memory. The participants of the experiment were divided into three conditions. The participants were told very different stories about a young boy using 12 slideshows. After the story, the participants were asked to rate their level of emotion and were then invited back two weeks later to answer questions about the story to assess their memory of it. The first condition involved a mundane story in which the boy visits the workplace of his father. The second condition was told a tragic story in which the boy is involved in a car accident, has his legs severed and eventually re-attached in the hospital. The third condition involved the same tragic story but the participants were given a beta-blocker that blocks adrenaline receptor sites on the amygdala. The researchers found that the group who was read the mundane story performed significantly worse than the tragic story group. The participants assigned to the beta-blocker condition rated their emotions the same as the tragic story group but answered questions just as accurately as the group who were told a mundane story. These results suggest that adrenaline plays a key role in the formation of flashbulb memory. This can be attributed to the location of adrenaline receptor sites on the amygdala, a part of the brain playing a major role in emotional processing and formation of memory.

The study has some serious limitations.  First, the group that had the traumatic story could have long-term effects as a result of hearing the story.  This means that the results are irreversible, which is an ethical problem. Secondly, the people were deceived in the story, not knowing that they were going to hear a tragic story.  The strength of the study was that the researchers had received consent.  Another limitation is that the participants were all students.  This means that the results cannot be generalized.

Newcomer et al (1999) aimed to study the effects of the stress hormone cortisol on verbal declarative memory. Participants were randomly allocated to one of three conditions. Participants in the high cortisol group were given a tablet containing 160mg of cortisol every day for four days. The second condition was given low levels of cortisol, with a 40 mg pill every day. The third group was the control group who was given a placebo tablet containing no cortisol. Each of the four days the participants would be instructed to listen to a prose paragraph and recall parts of it, in order to test them for the ability of their verbal declarative memory. The researchers found that the group of participants given high levels of cortisol performed the worst, and their performance decreased each day they took the tablet. Interestingly, the condition that did the best was the one receiving a small level of the stress hormone; they performed slightly better than the placebo group. This suggests that the hormone cortisol can be beneficial to memory in small amounts but detrimental in large.

Similar to the study by McGaugh and Cahill, the study has ethical problems.  The first group was exposed to "undue stress or harm."  The cortisol would raise their stress levels, leaving them feel uneasy for the four days.  In addition, it could have long-term effects on their health. However, like McGaugh and Cahill, they had informed consent. Finally, the study cannot be generalized because it was only done on Americans; other cultures may memorize differently and so cortisol might not be as effective.

Studies by McGaugh and Cahill (1995) and by Newcomer et al (1999) both support the idea that hormones play a key role in human behaviour. The researchers investigated the effects of adrenaline and cortisol on flashbulb and verbal declarative memory.  Both studies allow researchers to explain common human behaviours, for example why emotional traumatic memories are easily and vividly remember or why people have a hard time recalling information under high levels of stress.

760 words

Focus on the question: The essay could be more focused on the question.  The essay is primarily descriptive of research on the effects of hormones, but the evaluation is not the main focus of the response. 1 mark.

Knowledge and understanding: The essay demonstrates very good understanding of the studies. Good understanding of the effect of the hormones and how they work. The actual role of the hormones should be identified. Psychlogical terminology used is appropriate. 5 marks.

Use of research: There are two studies used to support the essay which are well explained.  6 marks.

Critical thinking: There is an attempt at critical thinking, but it is superficial and/or of marginal relevance to the question. 1 mark.

Clarity and organization: Language and organization are clear.  2 marks.

Total: 15 marks

Predicted: 6