Exemplar: Research methods
The following sample is a response to the question: Evaluate approaches to research used in the study of health problems. The command term "evaluate" requires students to address both strengths and limitations of the methods. Please note that "approaches to research" means "research methods" on Paper 2.
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One of the goals of health psychology is to understand health problems and why they occur. In order to do this, they want to use research methods that are naturalistic as possible. If a study is too artificial, then it may not be applied successfully in order to improve a community’s general health. Two naturalistic approaches to research are case studies and natural experiments. | The introduction clearly outlines the argument that will be made in the essay. Two research methods are clearly identified. |
A natural experiment is an experiment in which the independent variable is not manipulated by the researcher, but is naturally occurring. The researcher takes advantage of something that is happening, but loses the ability to establish a clear cause and effect relationship. One example is a study done by Kiecolt-Glaser on the effects of stress on the immune system. In their study, they measured university students’ level of stress one month before exams. As a result of this the participants were identified as either high stress or low stress. A blood sample was taken to measure the level of NK cells, which are a measure of the strength of one’s immune system. Another blood sample was taken after the students had taken their first two exams. | The first research method is clearly defined and an example is described, related to a health problem - the effect of stress on health. |
The researchers found a significant decrease in NK cell count in the high stress group after the second exam. It appears that the stress experienced during exams lowered their immune functioning. The fact that the researchers measured NK cell levels both before and after the exams (the naturally occurring IV) allows them to draw conclusions about the role of stress on the immune system. However, since the IV was not manipulated and the study was not highly controlled, it is not possible to draw a true cause and effect relationship. In addition, the researchers measured the level of loneliness for the students and found that those that had high stress but were less lonely had higher levels of NK cells, indicating that social support may be an important protective factor. | The results of the study are clearly stated. Strengths and limitations of the method are explained. |
| A second study is described, contrasting a true and a natural experiment. There is clear evaluation of the strengths and limitations of the study - as well as a more holistic approach to the problem of measuring stress in experiments. |
A final research method used in health psychology is a case study. A case study is a more holistic approach to studying an individual or a group – and it is longitudinal. It is carried out in a naturalistic setting so has high ecological validity – but since it is longitudinal and naturalistic, it is not only low in internal validity, it is difficult to replicate. Since replication is difficult, it is important that such studies have high sample sizes. One such study was carried out by Marmot et al. In the “Whitehall study,” the researchers wanted to see if one’s position in a social hierarchy had an effect on their health. In addition to questionnaires about their level of stress, researchers used medical records and interviews over a period of five years to see the effects of stress on their cardiovascular health. Marmot found that the people who were lower in the bureaucratic hierarchy had more health problems than those higher in the system, even when matched for other variables such as smoking, family history of heart disease and level of exercise. The study is important because it challenged the idea that those at the top of the socioeconomic ladder had the most stress and were most in danger of health problems. A case study uses method triangulation, which leads to a higher level of credibility. If the different research methods lead to the same conclusions, then there is a higher level of credibility. | The case study method is explained and evaluated - addressing both strengths and limitations. There is a clearly described example linked to the method. |
Although using naturalistic research methods is important in health research, they are difficult to replicate and they have low internal validity – meaning that confounding variables may play a role in the findings. It is important that findings from research in the lab, using controlled experiments, can confirm the findings of natural experiments and case studies. When this happens, researchers can draw firmer conclusions about cause and effect. | A short, relevant conclusion. |
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