HL Essay - Gaining Level 7

Being able to see really good model examples is essential to learning skills. All the better if those models are truly assessed by examiners as part of a session, and if they adhere to our guidelines for organising and structuring an excellent essay. This page ticks all of those boxes and gives us a glimpse of high-quality Level 7 work.

Writing a Level 7 response

The general structure of effective analysis can be seen in many places throughout this site, but is clearly outlined in this discussion of Paper 2: Paper 2 - Structuring an Essay. Of course, the HL Essay is about one work (or body of work), not two, and therefore is not comparative as this structure shows for Paper 2. However, a fairly simple glance at things suggests how this exact same structure can be used for the HL Essay. This student did exactly that, submitting this essay for the M22 session and gaining a Level 7 with 19/20 (5-5-5-4 on the criteria):

The examiner's comments read as follows:

A There is excellent knowledge and understanding of the work demonstrated here.

B There is consistent focus on evaluating and interpreting the test as well as the characters and stylistic features.

C The line of inquiry is well developed, and the integration of quotations is well done.

D Although not entirely seamless, the language is sophisticated and effective.

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